Kelli, I may have mentioned, is writing Lifeway Sunday school curriculum for Nov. 2K4. I'm doing a preliminary edit for it. She "names" the kindergartners in her instructions, like, "Have Jamie glue the pieces together..."
This is good, except all the kiddies are people I know, and most often are not 5.
For example, Jamie is my 34 year old brother.
And I have the image of the adults attempting to accomplish the tasks set forth for them in her instructions.
This makes my prelim edit much more challenging, due to the mental distractions.