March 26, 2007


Sensation-al
Posted by Bryan

A while back, we mentioned that Kaylyn's contribution to the annual PTA-sponsored "Reflections" competition" has fared well, moving from local to regional and regional to statewide consideration.

We were recently notified that Kaylyn received the Overall Award of Excellence for her poem Softball Sensations by the Texas PTA. Her poem will be on display at the State Capitol in Austin this late summer (along with other OAE recipients), and her poem now goes on to the national PTA competition.

The list of state finalists is here (Kaylyn's on page 3). It is a PDF download.

Here's her poem:

    Softball Sensations

    By: Kaylyn McAnally

    Four bases – pearly white, but smudged with chocolate-colored dirt – emerge from the infield to form the corners of a softball diamond. The bleachers reflect bronze, silver and gold, as though they were made from Olympic medals. From the sky’s balcony seats the marshmallow clouds cheer for both teams.

    The scent of water is thick and warns of rain. Churning dust tickles my nose every time I scoop up a grounder. The fragrance of newly-cut grass greets players running to the lush, green outfield. The aroma of my leather glove gives me the confidence to make the big play.

    I try to block the sounds of the infield’s chattering as I step up to the plate. The fans’ cheers help me focus. The ball whizzes past home plate for a…strike! “Zero balls, one strike,” the umpire grunts. The next one zooms in and I swing… the “ding” announces my hit …all the way to the fence!! My cleat thuds as I step onto home plate. “Safe!”

    I’m tired in the last inning of the game. My worn-out glove feels like an overgrown hand. The ball is hit and I lunge forward to make the catch. The ball lands forcefully in my glove, stinging my hand underneath. Teammates rush over, tackling me in a triumphant team hug.

    My dry mouth enjoys the cold, crisp water I pour down my throat. A teammate offers me sour watermelon bubblegum. Instead, I grab a handful of salty sunflower seeds. Spitting the seeds onto the dugout floor, I celebrate our team’s win. Licking my lips, I discover the sweet flavor of victory.

    My senses come alive at the softball field.

March 26, 2007 1:32 PM
Comments

wow. that's incredible! I taught elem. school for years and never saw anything close to that. what a writer she is! wonder where she gets that from? :)

Posted by: rebecca at March 27, 2007 7:58 AM
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